Official PUL Score. Originality: 2 Length: 3 Grammar: 1 Vocabulary: 1 Coherency: 1 Total: 8/20
It was a good effort, however there is room for improvement. Your vocabulary and grammar are both lacking, showcasing a rather simplistic approach to flirting. I acknowledge some people might appreciate that, even if I don't. The length of it was quite nice but could have been snappier. Finally, I personally feel as if you could have been clearer about what the "right end" is to you, as that also may be personal preference.
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Originality: 2
Length: 3
Grammar: 1
Vocabulary: 1
Coherency: 1
Total: 8/20
It was a good effort, however there is room for improvement. Your vocabulary and grammar are both lacking, showcasing a rather simplistic approach to flirting. I acknowledge some people might appreciate that, even if I don't. The length of it was quite nice but could have been snappier. Finally, I personally feel as if you could have been clearer about what the "right end" is to you, as that also may be personal preference.
You can do better, Amagi. Try.